Thesis
In a country where girls are killed just for going to school, one teenager dared to speak out for women's educational rights, and she goes by the name Malala. But on October 9, 2012 something happened that would change her life forever. Malala tried to save school for girls and suffered consequences for speaking out.
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In Swan valley in the county of Pakistan, girls were banned from going to school by the Taliban. But Malala stood up. In 2007, the Taliban came to Swan Valley, Malala’s home town. When they came, they banned music, dance, and many personal liberties including not going to school for girls. The Taliban tortured the citizens to spread fear and obedience. They tortured them with violence- including public whippings, starving, and beheadings. Malala could not take this insanity anymore and had a speech about woman's educational rights. Even though her speech might not help, she tried.
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Malala held an extraordinary speech in New York. But the speech caught the attention of the wrong people. The Taliban considered Malala as a threat to their lives and she started to receive deadly threats. She got emails, calls, and some threats were even on the news. The threats were about the Taliban wanting to kill Malala, but nothing happened for a while until October 9, 2012 when the threats became real.
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On the day of October 9, 2012 something happened that would change her life forever. Malala was on a school bus about to go home, when a man pounced on to the bus and yelled Malala by her name. All the girls on her bus gazed at Malala in excitement because they thought the man was here for an interview. But the man looked straight at Malala, pulled out a colt 45 gun at her, and terrorized he shot 3 bullets. One piercing Malala’s forehead traveling through her skin into her left shoulder and out, and the other two hitting her friend’s arms. The gunman swiftly scampered off the bus and never returned.
Conclusion
One year after the shooting on December 10th, Malala won a Noble Peace Prize and was given to from Prime Minister, Yousaf Raza Gilani. Malala won it for her pride towards promoting woman’s educational rights. And now there is a day just for Malala called “Malala day” on February 8. Even though Malala got shot by the Taliban, she survived and is still fighting for woman’s educational rights.
In a country where girls are killed just for going to school, one teenager dared to speak out for women's educational rights, and she goes by the name Malala. But on October 9, 2012 something happened that would change her life forever. Malala tried to save school for girls and suffered consequences for speaking out.
paragraph #1
In Swan valley in the county of Pakistan, girls were banned from going to school by the Taliban. But Malala stood up. In 2007, the Taliban came to Swan Valley, Malala’s home town. When they came, they banned music, dance, and many personal liberties including not going to school for girls. The Taliban tortured the citizens to spread fear and obedience. They tortured them with violence- including public whippings, starving, and beheadings. Malala could not take this insanity anymore and had a speech about woman's educational rights. Even though her speech might not help, she tried.
paragraph #2
Malala held an extraordinary speech in New York. But the speech caught the attention of the wrong people. The Taliban considered Malala as a threat to their lives and she started to receive deadly threats. She got emails, calls, and some threats were even on the news. The threats were about the Taliban wanting to kill Malala, but nothing happened for a while until October 9, 2012 when the threats became real.
Paragraph #3
On the day of October 9, 2012 something happened that would change her life forever. Malala was on a school bus about to go home, when a man pounced on to the bus and yelled Malala by her name. All the girls on her bus gazed at Malala in excitement because they thought the man was here for an interview. But the man looked straight at Malala, pulled out a colt 45 gun at her, and terrorized he shot 3 bullets. One piercing Malala’s forehead traveling through her skin into her left shoulder and out, and the other two hitting her friend’s arms. The gunman swiftly scampered off the bus and never returned.
Conclusion
One year after the shooting on December 10th, Malala won a Noble Peace Prize and was given to from Prime Minister, Yousaf Raza Gilani. Malala won it for her pride towards promoting woman’s educational rights. And now there is a day just for Malala called “Malala day” on February 8. Even though Malala got shot by the Taliban, she survived and is still fighting for woman’s educational rights.